Kissing Story Sample – Version 2

So, here’s the new version of the Kissing Story page I posted before.  If you remember, there was some concern that the public display of affection was too much for the children’s market in the original version. So, here is a new version with the parental kissing off-panel.

Page 1 Sample v2 for Web

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Kissing Story Sample

Here’s a new sample.  This is page 1 of a comic book I’ve written that my art rep will be sending out later this summer.  Hopefully we’ll get someone interested in it.  There was some interest in this character from a previous sample featuring her, so we’re hoping it will sell.

This sample reuses the first four panels from that previous sample.  (I reformatted it for rectangular panels and changed the shading style.)  The last two panels are new.

The working title is Kissing Story, but I don’t really care for that.  Hopefully we’ll come up with a better one.  It’s an age-appropriate story about sexual harassment and consent.

I may actually need to change the panel with mom and dad kissing to have them not also hugging because my rep says that may be too much physical contact for the age range.  So, I may post a revision  with that changed.  We’ll see.

Kissing Story Sample Page 1

I Need a Caption for This

This image needs a caption, but I haven’t thought of anything much.  Here’s what I’ve got:

“But, honey, he’s a Nigerian prince and he needed my help.”

“You never call, you never write, you never email, you never tweet, you never PM, IM, or text, and you never like anything I post on your Facebook page!”

“Your father and I have decided that you need to take a second job to support us.”

“I wanted to adopt a dog, but they said I was too old to become a parent.”

What do you think?  Can you think of anything better?  Suggestions are welcome!