Most months I try my hand at designing a greeting card for Hallmark Cards’ monthly contest. This month one of the categories is a retirement card.
One idea I had for it was a scene where an old lab rat was retiring. Well, what’s the traditional retirement gift? A gold watch, of course. So, the younger rats are giving the older one a gold watch.
I finished the illustration and I’m happy with it. But I’m having trouble coming up with the line. This is what I have:
On the front: Bob receives his retirement gift.
On the inside: Hope yours is a better fit. Congratulations!
I think these lines are okay, but not great. Anybody want to help me make this funnier? Just leave a comment below.